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PostSubject: Amber Davis    Mon Jun 29, 2015 5:03 pm

Name: Amber Davis
Nickname?: Amby
Age: 16
Gender: female
Sexuality: straight
Personality: Amber is an extremely shy, young girl. While she is extremely shy, she is very determined when it comes to her dreams. She loves to help others even though she doesn't talk to them a lot. She tends to keep to herself and has a slight stuttering problem. People usually avoid her because of this.
Looks: Dark hair, brown eyes, olive skin
God parent: Nyx
Power(s)?: Shadow control, shadow travel (If she uses it too much, she becomes weak)
Backstory: Ambers Dad, Maxwell, met Nyx in Los Angeles when Max was there for an acting audition. They hit it off and hooked up. 9 months later, Amber was born. Amber grew up in New York City and went to camp right before she turned 15 years old. On her way to camp, she made a promise to herself that she would travel the world and visit every country. She was very nervous about going to camp as she was afraid of all the people that would be there. However, upon arrival, she made a few friends. Not a lot, but a few.

Strengths: Running (She does cross country), fashion design (She hopes to create her own fashion line), Listening to others, hiding (She is tiny and can fit in small spaces), climbing trees
Weaknesses: Making friends (She is too afraid to talk to people), afraid of cats, addicted to Netflix (She spends a lot of time streaming tv shows), speaking loud enough for people to hear her
Weapon(s): sword named Arivante
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PostSubject: Re: Amber Davis    Mon Jun 29, 2015 6:15 pm

Please please please correct your grammar and spelling errors. This goes for all of your forms. Grammar and spelling errors are not funny and they make RP posts annoying and hard to understand at times.

A tip: strengths and weaknesses can be summed up in paragraph form. A list can help, but often strengths and weaknesses will flow into each other, all interrelated in some way.

The backstory is a little short. While the sentence limit is fulfilled, it is choppy and doesn't really tell us much about Amber's past. It doesn't explain any part of her personality, or anything about her, really.
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PostSubject: Re: Amber Davis    Mon Jun 29, 2015 6:23 pm

I don't think its funny. And I didn't see any errors.
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PostSubject: Re: Amber Davis    Mon Jun 29, 2015 6:44 pm

Your sentences are short and choppy, and you don't see any errors because you're either not looking hard enough or you don't know they're errors, in which case you need to educate yourself a little more.

Also, how is an addiction to Netflix a legitimate weakness a demigod would have?
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PostSubject: Re: Amber Davis    Mon Jun 29, 2015 7:02 pm

She spends too much time on it to where she doesn't do anything else. She didn't always know she was a demigod. So it can be a normal addiction. Thanks Smile And I fixed the app.
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PostSubject: Re: Amber Davis    Mon Jun 29, 2015 7:47 pm

*Bump*
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PostSubject: Re: Amber Davis    Mon Jun 29, 2015 7:48 pm

Only Alyssa can accept, sorry.
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PostSubject: Re: Amber Davis    Mon Jun 29, 2015 8:08 pm


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